Why teachers are so stressed.......
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Compo written by a student. Enjoy
Looking outside my window,got bird and boy. Boy eat bird, bird die. I see a rainbow outside. It was very colourful. I am happy because it is very beautiful. I see children playing with balls outside. All kind of balls. Football, basketball, baseball, volleyball....
My mom and dad come into my room and sit beside me on my bed. They look outside the window too. My mom is sitting on my right and dad is sitting on my left. They are happy that I am happy. Suddenly, some sparrows flew past. Our family dog then jumped out of the window to catch some birds.
Our dog is a very active dog. He eats a lot. He is an active dog who eat a lots. This is why he is active. However, he is not a very clever dog because he is mad. When he jumped out of the window to catch the birds, he forgot that our family lives on the twenty fifth floor. Dog die. Me sad.
This is a bad day for me looking outside the window because I am sad. I am sad because my parents just bought the dog yesterday. We are sad. Suddenly an aeroplane flies past the window. We forget about our dog and very surprised because we never seen an aeroplane before. As a result, we are happy because the aeroplane is exciting.
My mom is talking to me, but i continue looking out the window. She screams, but i still look outside the window. I am deaf because of the large sound from the aeroplane. We are sad again, buy happy because the rainbow is still in the sky.
This is an exciting day outside my window.
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very creative
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nice
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poor dog
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maybe little Johnny wrote the composition...heh
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"Boy eat bird, bird die." -
lol. This is funny.
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LOL
y little johnny? -
ok mistake
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I never ever wrote like that in school.. ever..
Nevertheless.. funny.. and cute..
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ya la little johnny write de la