小木马

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:18

  i am actually thingking.. why no �木马

  but eminem style. an angry song. That the �木马

  reminds u of the angry childhood days... the abuse. ur fuked up parents. drunk father. abusive psycho mum. n all u had is ur �木马

  and then as u grow up , everytime u look at it , u hate it.. but u love it at the same time.  lol

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:19

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  i am actually thingking.. why no �木马

  but eminem style. an angry song. That the �木马

  reminds u of the angry childhood days... the abuse. ur fuked up parents. drunk father. abusive psycho mum. n all u had is ur �木马

  and then as u grow up , everytime u look at it , u hate it.. but u love it at the same time.  lol

  urs sounds like rock leh

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:19

  Originally posted by Mospeada:

  maybe can be those �木马 at those merry go round one leh...

  and both the boy and girl were still young...

  lol.. ya.. ur limited choice of the �木马

  mmmm...

• nehpyh

  30 Apr 08, 16:20

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  i am actually thingking.. why no �木马

  but eminem style. an angry song. That the �木马

  reminds u of the angry childhood days... the abuse. ur fuked up parents. drunk father. abusive psycho mum. n all u had is ur �木马

  and then as u grow up , everytime u look at it , u hate it.. but u love it at the same time.  lol

  yes...�木马 is the motif....it's should be in the chorus and as and when we need to motif to stress on something....

   

  No one has started on topic sentences leh....

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:21

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  lol.. ya.. ur limited choice of the �木马

  mmmm...

  旋转木马 lah

  

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:21

  Originally posted by Mospeada:

  urs sounds like rock leh

  lol.. i am tired of sappy songs. Once a while my bro n his artist friends draft some lyrics.. or sometimes he show me lyrics done by people.. man.. sappy.. cheesy... corny... u name it. Its got all that good stuff.

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:22

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  lol.. i am tired of sappy songs. Once a while my bro n his artist friends draft some lyrics.. or sometimes he show me lyrics done by people.. man.. sappy.. cheesy... corny... u name it. Its got all that good stuff.

  badz...how abt rap...

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:23

  Originally posted by Mospeada:

  旋转木马 lah

  

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  i am having another grand image coming up. Its gonna be a tear busting one. Korean MV style drama.. lol

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:23

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

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  i am having another grand image coming up. Its gonna be a tear busting one. Korean MV style drama.. lol

  somewhat like that....

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:23

  Originally posted by Mospeada:

  badz...how abt rap...

  So far the rap.. is crap.. Negarakuku can beat some of the raps the artists come up with..

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:24

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  So far the rap.. is crap.. Negarakuku can beat some of the raps the artists come up with..

  yah...that's what it is, right?

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:27

  Originally posted by nehpyh:

  yes...�木马 is the motif....it's should be in the chorus and as and when we need to motif to stress on something....

   

  No one has started on topic sentences leh....

  Well..

  mmm... i think most ppl will go for sappy love related. the �木马 has to have deep meaning . if not , then it has to be able to bring forth the feelings.

  anyways , i cant wait to see the entire lyrics. he he.. n see if it makes sense or not.

  U guys know John Mayer - Daughters ? lol..   the tune is good. But the lyrics just totally.. ???? it up. I mean if u look at a logical point of view it acutally makes quite a funny lofical point of view.

• nehpyh

  30 Apr 08, 16:28

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    > mos: like spinning carousel, like the wind in the face, like the flashing coloured lights, like the hands that is reaching out to the partner, like the many envious eyes that watching, etc...
• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:29

  Originally posted by Mospeada:

  yah...that's what it is, right?

  ya.

  but rap...ar.. in my opinion , whether the rap works has to do with the linguistics. Like rap in english , korean , or what actually sounds nice. Can u imagine rap in pinoy or vietnam ? lol

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:33

  ok...this song is abt a couple...they used to have wonderful time together....what they were able to related most is the 旋转�木马 or �木马 as is mentioned many times in the song.

  imagine when they were still together, at the �木马, the boy was standing beside the girl, holding her hand...time seemed to have come to a stand still...they hope this moment would last forever

  however, due to some circumstances, they went their separate way. and one day, the boy, after several years, passes by 旋转�木马 again but now it is run down....and he is full of regrets....
  

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:36

  not bad not bad..

  lol..

  Well.. time to eleborate the circumstances in the music!

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:40

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  not bad not bad..

  lol..

  Well.. time to eleborate the circumstances in the music!

  then i think the first verse got to change liao

• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:43

  i actually had a thought just now. . . but anyways lets just let this one roll out and see how it goes first.

  Too many ideas that overlap my become irrelevant n more confusing. We identify the core issue meaning to the song first.

  If i wake up middle of the night.. lin gan.. n post some lyrics.. dun say i loco already ya. lol!

• newcomer

  30 Apr 08, 16:45

  u need some stronger shit man.

• meltz

  30 Apr 08, 16:46

  eminem version by meltz . haha .. crap damn that �木马 reap my heart and soul .. left me crying .. left me sow bring bad memories that dont belong ... SCREAM !!! get the fu*k*** shit of my mind ... :lol:
• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:47

  Originally posted by newcomer:

  u need some stronger shit man.

  I going for a small session after this... i go home later log on n see what my.. elevated conscienceness got come up with anything or not.

  Purple haze... God i love this country.

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:49

  Originally posted by meltz:

  eminem version by meltz . haha .. crap

  damn that �木马 reap my heart and soul .. left me crying .. left me sow
  bring bad memories that dont belong … SCREAM !!! get the fuk** shit of my mind …

  and it broke ah new's finger

• nehpyh

  30 Apr 08, 16:50

  Originally posted by BadzMaro:

  I going for a small session after this... i go home later log on n see what my.. elevated conscienceness got come up with anything or not.

  Purple haze... God i love this country.

  hahahah...maro, what's your fav music genre??? think for your message, it has to be melody/rythm driven....let me know....we may have something to explore together too....

• Mospeada

  30 Apr 08, 16:51

  ah meltz,

  i have made changes to ur verses leh

  很想陪你一直走下去

  为了你，为了幸�, �使累了, 我也愿�

  �悔放开了你的手, 留下了空虚孤寂

   

  Alternate ending 1

  微微风雨中, 陈旧�木马, 留下的�是片片的回忆

  �木马�然熟悉, 对你的爱已�去..... (ah meltz - amended by ah mos)

  
  
• BadzMaro

  30 Apr 08, 16:51

  Originally posted by meltz:

  eminem version by meltz . haha .. crap

  damn that �木马 reap my heart and soul .. left me crying .. left me sow
  bring bad memories that dont belong … SCREAM !!! get the fuk** shit of my mind …

  'Cau ni ma... cau ni ma..'�木马 �木马 .. wei shen me wei shen me !

  Xiao shi hou , wu liao bei ma da. Chu qu bei ren da. Jin Chu bu zhi qu na li. Ren shen gan dao hao mei yi,

  å°�木马 å°�木马... kan dao ni , tu lan you bu lan..  wo zhe yang de gan jue bu zhi zhen me ban

  Zhan da he jiu , chi yao chou da ma..

  Chou yien , gan pao , wan nu ren.

  �木马 �木马 ... ni zai na li!